A great story Ana, how exciting it would be to find a treasure chest when on a stroll. I like that you have tried to use higher level words, just remember to check that they are used correctly and make sense. Keep working on using description to paint a picture in the readers' mind. Well done Ana.
Hey Ana its Te Waiuke here, I could see your Descriptive writing, of the Waman opening a secrete chest, that's a nice background to go with your Writing,and really all some story that I cold see those words can fit in with the background, that is an really cool story to here, so any ways I'm gonna go ok, so if want to se my blog its this http://kpstewaipuket.blogspot.com/ and see ya.
Hi Ana, its Kyla from kawakawa primary school I really like your Descrptive writing and how you use realy good wordd that hook your reader in and not just us boring old words.
Hey Ana! It's Mia, your story is very desciptive and very interesting. You surely have a big imagination if you could describe this much :) Anyways, if you would like to check out my learning go to this link address and BOOM. Ciao Now :) http://kpsmiat.blogspot.com/
A great story Ana, how exciting it would be to find a treasure chest when on a stroll. I like that you have tried to use higher level words, just remember to check that they are used correctly and make sense. Keep working on using description to paint a picture in the readers' mind. Well done Ana.
ReplyDeleteHey Ana its Te Waiuke here, I could see your Descriptive writing, of the Waman opening a secrete chest, that's a nice background to go with your Writing,and really all some story that I cold see those words can fit in with the background, that is an really cool story to here, so any ways I'm gonna go ok, so if want to se my blog its this http://kpstewaipuket.blogspot.com/ and see ya.
ReplyDeleteHi Ana, its Kyla from kawakawa primary school I really like your Descrptive writing and how you use realy good wordd that hook your reader in and not just us boring old words.
ReplyDeleteHey Ana! It's Mia, your story is very desciptive and very interesting. You surely have a big imagination if you could describe this much :) Anyways, if you would like to check out my learning go to this link address and BOOM. Ciao Now :)
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