Hey Bloggers!
I was learning to write about a sensory poem about lockdown our task was to explain by using our senses. We just had to write it about what we sensed during the lockdown. I found this easy to do because I rememberd what I did in lockdown and it wasnt hard at all but next time I will add more to each sentences.
You definitely picked up your senses well in this poem and have written some great sentences. I too felt like I did a lot of typing and could hear music blasting across the valley often. I like that you identified in your learning story that you need to add more to each sentence. I agree with this, as a little more detail, or extra descriptive language can make your sentences more powerful.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Ana!