Hi Ana Its Shanaya from Kawakawa Primary I liked how you listed he may be an old tree maybe next time you could add in a backstory for him otherwise I really like it Yours truly - Shanaya P.S Come check out my blog kpsshannayas.blogspot.com
Hey Ana, you have made some interesting observations about this picture. Like Shanaya said, maybe a story that talks about what he does, what he has seen, how long he has roamed the forest etc would add extra interest. I like that you have used some descriptive language too e.g. lurking. Keep up the great work!
Hi Ana
ReplyDeleteIts Shanaya from Kawakawa Primary
I liked how you listed he may be an old tree
maybe next time you could add in a backstory for him
otherwise
I really like it
Yours truly -
Shanaya
P.S Come check out my blog kpsshannayas.blogspot.com
Hey Ana, you have made some interesting observations about this picture. Like Shanaya said, maybe a story that talks about what he does, what he has seen, how long he has roamed the forest etc would add extra interest. I like that you have used some descriptive language too e.g. lurking. Keep up the great work!
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