Malo ni Bloggers! so today as you can see this is an Anzac poem well this wasnt one of our task but i still wanted to post it because Anzac is an meaningful day of remeberance of our loved ones that tried to save us with all there hearts. And yeah thats all hoped you like my poem stay safe and take care
Least we forget! ๐๐❤
Kia ora Ana Kyla here, I really like all the descriptive langue you have used in your poem. I really like how even though its a poem it really hooks your reading in and I love how you are paying attention to what is going on around the world.
ReplyDeleteKeep the good work up
Hello Ana,
ReplyDeleteThis is Kaia from your class. I really love your wonderful poem, I also really liked the background how it matched what you wrote a Poem about. I enjoyed reading this poem and every time you come up with poems they are great! Come check out my blog at https://kpskaiar.blogspot.com/
Sincerely
Kaia
This is a lovely piece of writing Ana, very thoughtful. It is a shame that we have have to battle evil in some way even now. But we should always be grateful to those who fight or have fought for us all. Well done.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ana,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your poem. It made me feel a lot of emotions as I was reading it. First it made me sad thinking about war and why does it have to happen? I also was sad thinking about all the people who are effected. The next emotion was pride. You make me proud because your passion for Anzac day and what it represents comes through in your writing. Thank you Ana. I can't wait to read more of your writing and see more of your work you put on your blog.
Take care,
Whaea Cara.