Hi Ana, that is a great summary of this story, I can fully understand how that story came to be. Sad that she felt that way though, maybe she could have talked to the tuna about how she was feeling rather than getting it killed. Just remember to write a learning story to go with your work. What was your task? Why did you pick this story? What was easy/hard? Why? etc.
I'm Kaia from your class. I really like your story what was your favourite part of writing this?. It's really cool that you have photos on the side that match the story you did. Come check out my blog at https://kpskaiar.blogspot.com/
Hi Ana, that is a great summary of this story, I can fully understand how that story came to be. Sad that she felt that way though, maybe she could have talked to the tuna about how she was feeling rather than getting it killed.
ReplyDeleteJust remember to write a learning story to go with your work. What was your task? Why did you pick this story? What was easy/hard? Why? etc.
Hello Ana,
ReplyDeleteI'm Kaia from your class. I really like your story what was your favourite part of writing this?. It's really cool that you have photos on the side that match the story you did. Come check out my blog at https://kpskaiar.blogspot.com/
Sincerly
Kaia